Manderby's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Kirby Epic Paper 2 STAGE 2-2: Munchy Park Entrance.]

The stopmotion is actually not bad, especially thesecond part. But you must not use proprietary music (Celeste) without permission. Reupload without it.

EDIT: That's better.

GeorgeGW responds:

Yeah that is true, I change it now ^^
Very sorry for doing that.

[Yotam & Fantasia 19]

You did upload the video you intended to upload, did you?
EDIT: All good now. :)
EDIT2: Maybe repost for zoro star ratings do disappear.

PS: Where can I get that pump?

LazyMuffin responds:

omg fuck shit fuck

[Johnny Rocket Game]

I played it one year ago! Fun little time waster. :)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p7zoW6vR-eM

LittleCartoons responds:

Cool, nice stream/

[Cat Got Your Tongue?]

It's a very good short but there are 2 glaring faults which I believe make this score too low for what it would be: 1. The music is not fitting at all and too loud as well, I presume, you get a better experience by removing it completely. 2. Please correct the aspect ratio. Please. It's a shame to look at. I mean, even the thumbnail is wrong. You do have the original, don't you?

Mithmeoi responds:

It's 11 years old, so no I don't. Back then you were doing good to get something to 480p on the net and everything was cropped.
As for music, it was made specifically for it by a friend, he was still really new to composing and sound compilation at the time.
Despite that I'm glad you could at least appreciate the animation.

[Crossed (Short film)]

Story and Expressions are very good. I enjoyed the film and that deserves 5 stars.

Though I think, you need some development to do. Your character has great visual charm and you seem to know its design by heart. Maybe a bit too much by heart. Meaning: I could very well imagine something animated by you in a way more extreme way (saying that with your style being kind of abstract already). Go wild, go more to the surreal realm of imagination and spread your wings. Doesn't have to be all storytelling consistent, Doesn't have to be realistic. I'd enjoy some boldness.

Exaggaration responds:

Thank you very much!

Oh, I definitely do. Mentioned in my description, I would've done more bold moves and such, I was just on a time restriction. But as an animator by myself, I absolutely agree.

[Mr. Potato Man]

A rube-goldberg-cartoon. Nice!

ChutneyGlaze responds:

thank you manderby!

[ARE WE THEM YET ?]

Animation max. But I don't get... the story? Is it supposed to be like the tuning the radio back and forth? Are these people related to each other? Jumping in time back and forth?
Really great animation. But it is a little tiring not to connect the rather fast scene switches.

johnnycigarettex responds:

the story is about two brothers, from birth til death, the other characters are secondary

[Ambition's Journey // RISE Music Video Parody | League of Legends Worlds 2018]

Pretty awesome animation. Though it was a little too "stupid" sometimes. And I suggest to remove the background music, first because you probably get NG into trouble due to rights (even though you have been "asked" to do this parody by "someone") and second because it doesn't fit at all.

ZettaiAbsolute responds:

We had to use the music as it is the official soundtrack for the League of Legends 2018 World Championship and Riot Games themselves issued the creation of this animation.

Glad to hear you liked it overall though~

[The Homeless Man]

I dislike the cliché content of this video, but in the end, I have to admit, it entertained me.

therwiganimation responds:

Thanks for your comment, appreciate it

[What if Pewdiepie Vs T-Series was an anime]

Blending fame with fandom, mix it with some memes and decorate it with hype-sprincles on top. Uninspired.

Fienamation responds:

agreed