Manderby's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Time Travel Paradoxes (Animated Infographic)]

4 Stars for the animation effort. 3 for Voice acting which is ok but not very lively.
1 Star minus for "Subscribe and Comment" being part of the video. Don't do this please. At least you kept it short.

RedOwlCS responds:

Thanks for your ideas! Will fix them in the next video. :)

[Poisoning Pigeons: The Animation]

Wow, first, I thought that was plagiarism because there is another rather famous austrian artist Georg Kreisler which has pretty much the same chancon: "Tauben vergiften im Park". But after a little research it seems it is the other way around that Kreisler stole this song from Tom Lehrer. Or maybe not. It is not entirely clear. But who cares. The animation is nice. :)

[The Adventures of Chutney Glaze Season One Trailer!]

Every now and then, there is a new kid in town here on Newgrounds, turning the rules upside down, creating new ideas, challenging existing concepts. You are one of those "kids". That's why I love spending time on this platform. Congrats on the first "Season", looking forward for what you have in mind!

ChutneyGlaze responds:

I love this comment, it is so cool! Thank you so much Manderby!

[Take On Me Collab]

Why am I enjoying this so much?

[IN-SHADOW: A Modern Odyssey]

Please team up with Genndy Tartakovsky and James Lee. Make a modern-life knighthood story or somethong else which could grow epic.

And even if you don't: Kudos!

[Fatal Portrait]

Nice!

It has some flaws, like the candle, which would make cool lighting effects, but the room looks always very bright. Already pointed out by others, what is the reason the protagonist is in this museum? A short pre-story like a chase from a gang in the rain with an escape to that museum would have helped. And from the moment where she sees the fatal portrait, the scene cuts could have been even quicker, for example just the fraction of the second where the mouth blows out the candle. Would have been an even more shocking ending.

But still: nice!

RandomHeri responds:

Thank you for the suggestions, I guess the story would have been better if it showed how she got to the house. Since I had a deadline this was the best I could have fleshed it out to. But I think the best way I could have done this was show it through the paintings how she got there. Concern with the cuts I think they were fine how they are. When I was working out the timing I did have the cuts quicker but it just didn't sit right to me so I made them how they are.

Thank you for the critique it'll be very helpful for when I do my next short :)

[regarding Pie]

Now, let me give you five stars. For making so much progress.

But let me give you a little slap in the face as well. This was the first of your animations I watched completely without rolling eyes. In my opinion, you have an already (too early) established, very recognizable style in drawing and in pace. This gives you lots of fans but on the other hand enprisons your progress. Everytime I started watching something, I quit after less than a minute, because I was just not hooked and thought: Still the same artist, still the same thing, still the same flaws. This is the first piece, which kept me watching (although I would wish at times for it to be quicker paced). You clearly made progress, mainly because of basics like a proper intro and a clear story (what was the ending about though?). Even if the story has been recycled thousands of times before, it still is a story with context, setup, reasoning and propagation, which I've been missing from your previous animations all the time. Also, the proper use of frame-by-frame animation in this piece is a plus. Characters seem much more developed (still needs a little bit more of convincing though). Not everybody is the same trying-to-be-cool-and-grown-up-ever-knowing-better-and-wise-and-deep-thoughts personage. You did well this time. Overall, a good piece. Good, not great.

I think you may be more than pleased. Keep up the progres. But keep working, it is very promising!

WooleyWorld responds:

Nah. I'll stay at "pleased but not satisfied". There were a lot of issues with this animation that make me not enjoy it a whole lot. I find this is the problem with a committee.

Thanks for the review.

[Team Teen: Resurrection Part 1]

I'd watch it!

Some voice acting would have been nice.

[Welcome to SHMEVEN 11]

Very refreshing! Good voices!

And I like the undertale cameo. :)