Though drawn precise, voiced carefully and set up professionally, even clearer as the crumbs series, this one has a strongly dull and stereotypical story. You seem to limit yourself with trying to do something cool and desperately funny with respect to other shows known from TV.
This may sound harsh but I think you can handle this critic and I would hate to see you making more attempts in the same direction. Because there is more hidden behind your skills. I would love to see your animations in something not oriented to copying or parodying existing shows.
Nontheless, high ranking!