Manderby's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[CUDDLE PARTY with Cocko and Gallagher]

Consistent Voice acting and perfect animation!
I just didn't get the joke at the end.
Guess, I have to be in Australia to get it.

[Beep & Tweet - Sheridan Animated Short Film]

Superb.

[FALLEN GUYS - (Fall Guys Animation - What Actually Happens When You Die)]

The animation is decent, not really that much of a story though.

Main concern: Might I suggest to cut the whole second half where you advertise yourself. Don't just copy the same thing from YouTube and paste it here, it's off-putting. It means: "I did not gain enough traction on YouTube, hence I just slap the same thing here and see what sticks." Put a little effort into publishing your work on different platforms. If you put a small endscreen with a follow-me-on-different-platforms message, that's perfectly fine. But what you showed here just screamed of desperation. It's a small effort which will help you focus more on content and will lead to more comments and in the end followers here on Newgrounds.

beclet responds:

Thank you for the feedback, I haven't posted on Newgrounds before and it didn't actually cross my mind to change that part. I will next time!

[SUS (an Among Us short)]

This is your first animation? Wow, I see a great cinematic animation future ahead!

[Yolklore]

Above averegge.

[Arthur Blorg's Horrible Misfortune]

Your drawing and animation skills are close to some of the greatest seen here on Newgrounds. Way to go!

The sound effects could use some more bite. The story also lacks a bit and the pace is a bit too dragged out sometimes but at the same time sometimes too quick to realize what is happening. You can add some more pauses at the right times and a bit of sillyness in the next video. This one stands as the work it is.

Nontheless you deserve all the stars as this is really a great work!

ShaquilleSaddler responds:

Thank you!! I appreciate the critique! 🙏

[Moles]

I'd scream too.

[Cult Scouts: Sacrifice Badge]

Quite fun and sequels are already awaited. But I dont't get the masks. Why?

ClockworkPixel responds:

Scout uniform

[Feeling Lucky]

I dare not to say that I immediately missed the cigarette but... I do. Anyways, job well done. I just realize, the mouth looks like Rick and Mortys mouth, but horizontal. ;)

[White Feet]

Although simplistic in drawing style, one stays captivated due to an excellent story. It takes time to give love into animations, especially such long ones. You deserve to be proud of what you present here. Thanks for reminding us that such simple tales can root deep.